A Betovian History - 33 Pages - V1

This is a WIP ive been working on I posted it on goodreads so people could find it. Here is the link for goodreads and the much better version (Google Docs). Please read and critique in the comments if you have time :)

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/604612-a-betovian-history---33-pages---v1


https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-qXeZUQux_szRKlgiRMCKnXFxj4tqyusED-Gk3QBLts/edit?usp=sharing